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review 2007-12-14 ch 2,	dude. the story thus far is incredible. its like reading an actual published book i borrowed from the library. its amazing. and im not even exaggerating here. hurry up and write more, youre killing me here. P.S. those grammar mistakes you were talking about? didnt even catch any. the storys too good for me to notice little grammar mistakes.
review 2007-12-14 ch 1,	this story is seriously amazing. i couldnt stop reading the first chapter. its really like. i dunno how to describe it. ill let you know after i finish chapter 2.
Asia Ralaia Schiegoh 2007-03-20 ch 2,	Ah, a writer's block. I know all too well what you're talkin' about. Just wait a while longer until more inspiration comes to ya. ~ARS
Asia Ralaia Schiegoh 2007-03-19 ch 1,	Oh. Asia Ralaia Schiegoh enjoys this little number. Plan on finishing it? ~ARS
BookWorm22202 2007-03-11 ch 2,	Love it! update again soon please!
Suicidal Romance 2007-03-08 ch 1,	ha! very cute! i love it! its soo awesome! mucch better than my story...the three little pigs is a better story than mine! haha! well, i cant wait ta hear more from u soon, but i gotta go now!
A Slip of Words 2007-02-27 ch 2,	wow, i wonder why theo hates gina, asside from the fact that she's apparently a **. i cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter. update soon.
hippos-anoonymus 2007-02-26 ch 2,	clothe rack-- you are a stupid bengali, only bengali people say clothe rack, loser but I thought it was hilarious. I LOVED THIS CHAPTer, the DIALOGUE was so funny, my fave line would have to be No way in hell am I driving with that cow!”-- that was so funny I laughed aloud, no seriously it was so funny, and the main character is amazing I love his point of view, you just have to make him a little bit more perverted just to make him more guyish you know, but if you don't no prob he's still amazing I love this chappie update more **
hippos-anoonymus 2007-02-26 ch 1,	Well first off, Great title, Love it, it's like asking for a witty title but it already has one... Bravo okay, I also really like the dialogue, it's amusing and rather entertaining, and I could almost see your sense of humor pour out into to this story, excellentez chica, But-(cuz i wuv and I want you to do awesome) you have to work on your gramma a wee bit, and I'm not being a picky son of a ** i swear, it's just that if you varied your sentence structure a little bit your story would flow more, and the readers would be able to really hear your main character's voice (I heart your main character by the by...)- but hey if you don't exactly know what i'm talking about blame it on your english teachers, and I'll help you out But other than that you started out really well I give an A over all I have no idea why I sounded like some corny teacher this whole time, I guess i'm just overly excited that you've started a story and it's really good, and if you need help with gramma just email me the chapiters and I'll edit them for ya! k love from mr. huggles... DANCING ON SKYWALKS WITH YOU WAS MY DREAM COME TRUE
Salyl 2007-02-25 ch 1,	YAY! I love Metallica
A Slip of Words 2007-02-25 ch 1,	hahah, interesting. i can't wait to see where this story goes. pretty good so far, keep it up.
xLilyx 2007-02-11 ch 1,	Although it's a wee bit random I loved it. "Does mom know?" “I told her I fell off my bike.” I replied. “Your bike was stolen a year ago.” Absolute gold, I can just picture that. (I dunno if those lines came out if they didn't sorry lol.)
B34utifulDr34mer 2007-01-28 ch 1,	Ya posted it! good job!
Eccentric. 2007-01-28 ch 1,	Haha, Nemo! I love Brenda. I really enjoyed this first chapter, but to be completely honest with you, all of the curse words really threw me off and distracted me. I understand that they were needed for these scenes, but it was just overkill. Maybe try to find some different words? Great story =) -Jackie
no reason at all 2007-01-28 ch 1,	this was very well written, I think I am going to really like this story. Please update soon!

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