Reviews for One Last Attempt - FictionPress.com

Twilight Starr 2007-09-28 ch 1,	Good song. I like your penname. Good luck with songwriting and life. Have a wonderful day. :) ~Twilight Starr~
Chaotic Charisma 2007-02-09 ch 1,	Us liberal arts majors... us artists... this is the existence we're doomed to. Of course, you know this. This piece is different. Not very flowing in the lyrics sense. That probably would have taken away from the honesty of it. You know that too. I feel you. I'm exactly where you are. Then again... that's just another one of those things you know. We need to catch up.
Kusje 2007-01-29 ch 1,	I think that there was alot of 'bolded' words and sentences, and that somewhat got me mixed up when reading this poem, but I really did enjoy reading it. I'm sure everybody can relate with you here, especially on this subject you've written on. Great job. Thanks for reviewing my poem :)
EvilKing 2007-01-28 ch 1,	Hello. I really like this, and it is rather sad. I don't know much about this poem because some of it is not stated, or all of the meaning. As far as keeping distance I can relate, for 9 months or so now I've kept distance from everyone I've ever known and everyone I've met. -- Secondly, I thank you for your comment. She never did acknowledge whether she read it or not. I have a feeling she did but I will truly never know. I tried contacting her a month ago or so, but I was denied a response. Thanks for your comment.