 TheLadyPendragon 2009-05-17 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this. Now, I haven't really read a lot of Marvel comics or anything, but I think Superheroes are cool. Especially gay ones. xD I really like Josh and Chip. They both have cool personalities. Ed makes me think of the fine line between good and evil. He's not really *evil*, I can tell that now, but he's not good either, for some reason. Probably a deep, complicated reason. Something traumatic. I feel bad for him. I love the relationship between Chip and his dad. It's very sweet and he's a good son. Can't wait for more. Please update soon. Hopefully. But I can wait...maybe... |
 auel 2009-03-21 . chapter 1Hello!
I hope this isn't a one shot!
Do want more cute furry red dragons! |
 Shalli 2008-01-17 . chapter 1This was...I'm not sure what word fits best. Hilarious sounds too cheap, it was more than funny, it was...adorable, I guess? Even though I didn't really get an understanding of the world itself, it was understandable.
Will this be continued anywhere? |
 Love Eternally 2007-04-22 . chapter 1i like this. it's cute. poor chip. |
 Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-02-15 . chapter 1i really like so far!
chip and josh are kewl!
ed's . . . . special. i dunno he sounds a tad weird.
please rite more! |
 D.H. L'Orange 2007-02-05 . chapter 1hey! i put this one on hold in my inbox until i could have a chance to read it (since your stuff is always awesome to read). Anywho... this story looks like it's going to be really good! Please *please* update! (i really like superhero stories, did i mention that?)
: )
DH |
 DMLpacker 2007-01-30 . chapter 1Guys in denial are always so adorable... |
 Naynay 2007-01-30 . chapter 1 Ooh this is my new favorite beginning series.
I love how at first we see Captain Patriot through Josh`s POV and he seemed like a cliched idiot superhero, like the Prince in Happily Never After, but after following him back home he`s fleshed out and it`s explained why he seems like such a tool. The interaction with his dad making the costume and pulling him into a headlock with him not minding is really sweet.
Fave line: "there were days when he wished he looked a little less like an ad for white supremacy and more like his old man."
Can`t wait for the next chapter. |
 Aimee Straughston 2007-01-28 . chapter 1Oh, I really liked this! It was hilarious, and I love the superhero idea. I also like Josh's power. Is this going to be ongoing? I think it should be. |