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| ola 2007-07-15 ch 3,  | abuse*blink* muahaha. it seems like a wonderful start, and i can't wait for more. i assume there'll be more between gino and sin. those two are cute together. and it will do poor sin good to have gino around him *winks*. please write more soon! |
| Finger Dingbat 2007-06-08 ch 3, | abusei'll tell you this much - i'm liking it. ...likeing? my spellings shirt. which is sad after like what? 9 years of schooling? but your spelling is DIVINE. as is your plots and your charecters and i am ENTHRALLED. so please update. |
| dreamerdoll 2007-06-04 ch 3, | abuseAh, totally loving this story so far! Absolutely loving Sin, though Gino and Oz are pretty awesome as well! Terrific story, can't wait to read more! |
| lilylupin7 2007-06-04 ch 3, | abuseYay an update on this amazing story! |
| Love Eternally 2007-06-04 ch 3, | abusewow. craig is awesome. i wish I had an uncle like him. And i love Gino. Poor Tobin he's so confused lol. |
| Illusionwolf 2007-03-21 ch 2, | abuseThis is getting interseting. Please update soon |
| Redaura (aqua_eyes from lj) 2007-03-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseand? |
| Aimee Straughston 2007-02-18 ch 2, | abuseHey, I like this. It's an interesting concept and I love the characters. Good job. |
| Kyandoru 2007-02-10 ch 2, | abuseThis is a GREAT story! I love the idea of it, it's almost like Rapunzel. It will be fun to see Sin react to a world he has never been in. I also love the name of the cat. Please continue! ja ne |
| The Orange Cow 2007-02-08 ch 2, | abuseGreat story! Hmm, so it looks like Sinclair's whole corporation is full of spies. Sinclair doesn't strike me as stupid, though. Could it be... a trap?!(for the spies, not Sinclair) |
| lilylupin7 2007-02-02 ch 2, | abuseILOVETHISILOVETHISILOVETHIS story so much. I'm glad you updated this quickly |
| star 2007-02-01 ch 2, anon. | abusethis story is really cute x3 a bit weird though because you switched from tobin to sin halfway through the first chapter... update soon please! |
| Bubble 2007-02-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh I do like this story so far, alot really. Sin seems like a really lovely character and he has a kitty called Puppy! Gino seems to not be interested in Sin but his thoughts deceive him which is good. I wonder what's going to happen between them both? Update soon please. |
| mandraco 2007-02-01 ch 2, | abuseCool story. I like it. Except for the whole Sin being product of his parents thing. I almost didn't read any farther because of that, then decided to any because anything that started like that had to be interesting. And it didn't disappoint. =) Mandraco. |
| youLOVEamelia 2007-02-01 ch 2, | abuseVery good story so far. It's so nice to see a fresh new plot like this. Can't wait to read more! |