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ola 2007-07-15 . chapter 3
*blink* muahaha. it seems like a wonderful start, and i can't wait for more. i assume there'll be more between gino and sin. those two are cute together. and it will do poor sin good to have gino around him *winks*. please write more soon!
Finger Dingbat 2007-06-08 . chapter 3
i'll tell you this much - i'm liking it. ...likeing? my spellings shirt. which is sad after like what? 9 years of schooling? but your spelling is DIVINE. as is your plots and your charecters and i am ENTHRALLED. so please update.
dreamerdoll 2007-06-04 . chapter 3
Ah, totally loving this story so far! Absolutely loving Sin, though Gino and Oz are pretty awesome as well! Terrific story, can't wait to read more!
DMLpacker 2007-06-04 . chapter 3
Yay an update on this amazing story!
Love Eternally 2007-06-04 . chapter 3
wow. craig is awesome. i wish I had an uncle like him. And i love Gino. Poor Tobin he's so confused lol.
Illusionwolf 2007-03-21 . chapter 2
This is getting interseting. Please update soon
Redaura (aqua_eyes from lj) 2007-03-07 . chapter 2
and?
Aimee Straughston 2007-02-18 . chapter 2
Hey, I like this. It's an interesting concept and I love the characters. Good job.
Kyandoru 2007-02-10 . chapter 2
This is a GREAT story! I love the idea of it, it's almost like Rapunzel. It will be fun to see Sin react to a world he has never been in. I also love the name of the cat. Please continue!
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The Orange Cow 2007-02-08 . chapter 2
Great story! Hmm, so it looks like Sinclair's whole corporation is full of spies. Sinclair doesn't strike me as stupid, though. Could it be... a trap?!(for the spies, not Sinclair)
DMLpacker 2007-02-02 . chapter 2
ILOVETHISILOVETHISILOVETHIS story so much. I'm glad you updated this quickly
star 2007-02-01 . chapter 2
this story is really cute x3
a bit weird though because you switched from tobin to sin halfway through the first chapter...
update soon please!
Bubble 2007-02-01 . chapter 2
Oh I do like this story so far, alot really.
Sin seems like a really lovely character and he has a kitty called Puppy!
Gino seems to not be interested in Sin but his thoughts deceive him which is good. I wonder what's going to happen between them both?
Update soon please.
mandraco 2007-02-01 . chapter 2
Cool story. I like it. Except for the whole Sin being product of his parents thing. I almost didn't read any farther because of that, then decided to any because anything that started like that had to be interesting. And it didn't disappoint.

=) Mandraco.
youLOVEamelia 2007-02-01 . chapter 2
Very good story so far. It's so nice to see a fresh new plot like this. Can't wait to read more!
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