Oh, Ryons...! Poor baby! I feel so sorry for him, but somehow a little more sorry for his silly friend... poor little guys. What a cruel world they live in... anyway. Awesome story, I am very much enjoying it and look forward to reading more in the future :)

More? Please? There's so much going on already, I can't wait to see what happens next!

oh this is crazy good cant wait for the update

Very interesting beginning. Definitely wish there was more.

Bravo!

yipes! itz been a year! does this mean that there won'tbe more...? =[

absolutely addicted to this!

itz ever so lovely lovely xD

SO GOD! You must make more!

er.. i like all your stories. been cheking fp for new stories of yours for about 2 years now.
hoping for more chaps to this particular story.

Oh my, Lucan is acting like a brat with a temper tantrum...I do believe he's a little spoiled ^_^

:) I like it!I wish there was more. Can you please write more. Pretty please. :)

This story is really good so far. I can't wait to see more Lucan and Ryons interaction. It seems like it will be fun to see how they act around each other.I can't wait until you update.

poor ryons. lucan is being so cruel. can't wait for more.

So Breri did not know what he was getting into. And poor Ryons does not seem much better off. One thing confuses me. What is a breed? Please continue!
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I remember two other variations of this on your livejournal, and I'm very glad that you are writing more of it! I like Ryons and Breri a lot... poor Breri... I look forward to more. :)

Woah, this is interesting. Keep going, I like it. Not sure I understand the breed thing, but hopefully I'll figure that out next chapter.

I realize there was a switch...but I'm confused as to why.