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| ohthevoices 2008-09-17 ch 1,  | abuseI like that you added in her memory of the last time she saw her mother alive, and how normal it seemed, because I think it made this whole funeral scene much more powerful. You never know when one day you're going to wake up and it's going to be your last. =/ |
| Naomi Chick 2008-08-30 ch 9, | abusePoor Ariana. Things just doesn't seen to be going well in her life. I hope thing will get better, especially with her dreams. |
| ShaggyG 2008-08-29 ch 9, anon. | abusehmm i like the way the story is set up. it keeps bringing back what happened in the past every time the story may be goin slow. its keeping the reader reading. oh well i would recommend something when u skip a month after she has the nightmare so the reader gets there is a big time difference. |
| Naomi Chick 2007-11-04 ch 7, | abuseInteresting story. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| VirginiaVortex 2007-11-03 ch 8, | abuseI love this story, so update ASAP! Please! |
| j 2007-11-03 ch 8, anon. | abusedamn yet again my hopes have been foiled. and i was ready to read to. boo. |
| urbanfictionalist 2007-11-03 ch 8, | abusei loved it and it truely sad for ariana to lose her mother i cant even begin to explain howi would feel if i lost my mother but i loved the staory so far i acnt wait for an update |
| Singing for Absolution 2007-11-03 ch 8, | abuseoh! I love it! I've read all those books too! although...i tend to end up falling for the bad guy... |
| blue ruin 2007-09-18 ch 7, | abuseI felt a little sad. I was on a roll, going through chapters then it just stopped :(. haha. Update when you can! (i decided to stop demanding people to hurry up and update because then i feel like they purposefully wait a month to post a new chapter haha ;D). |
| K.T. The opinionated 2007-08-15 ch 7, | abuseHey, Ducky, I'm still reading. I know how things go with the delayed writing. Since I don't have "the walls" pushing in on me anymore (that translates as: My Sister in-law, step-niece and step-nephew aren't living in my home anymore) I seem to have misplaced my inspiration. I keep on starting to write and losing momentum, *sigh*. Anyway, as always, I enjoyed your story and look forward to the next chapter, -K.T. |
| Lyra Waterflame 2007-08-06 ch 7, | abusePlease write more soon? Please? Your story in very interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| j 2007-08-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseit was a good chap, she has friends already. yay. hmm she has to have some self destructive habits i thinks, since she had to escape from her body. and damn took u long enough. post quicker. |
| xoxo1 2007-08-04 ch 7, | abuseawesome chapter!! ugh, melinda is such a ** does her dad really hit her though? and are william and evelyn... vampires? |
| conjured heart 2007-08-03 ch 2, | abuseI'm really enjoying reading this. I can't wait for more. Even though I really couldn't identify with Ariana at first, I am really begining to like her as a character (it's not hard :) |
| Eternal Twilight620 2007-06-02 ch 6, | abuseo it's good so far! But...there's no more chapters to read! *pouts* That's depressing! |