 Le1chi 2009-11-01 . chapter 1I. loved. it. |
 crack the sky 2009-05-12 . chapter 1:D
heh.
loved it. |
 TheLadyPendragon 2008-12-21 . chapter 1He's certainly a lucky cabby! Oh-ho-ho. ^^ But I'm glad it ended nicely for him. Luka is really cool for a rich guy. :) |
 Catseye*Rose 2008-05-03 . chapter 1That was really cute and really romantic. I had a lot of fun reading it ^^ |
 Bluorange 2008-04-15 . chapter 1And so it is, such is the life of a cabbie... Very good and well thought out, especially since it's a one shot. I do have to admit that I loved Milo though, he was so funny. Poor guy he didn't deserve all of the crap people gave him(well he did, but i still adore him)
~Remember man, peace is the ONLY way~ |
 Laurena 2008-03-27 . chapter 1aw i liked this, it was cute! |
 paputsza 2008-01-13 . chapter 1o.o i can't review can i? |
 The Falconer 2007-08-11 . chapter 1That was such a nice story. Wonderfully told. I liked the secondary characters. You managed to fleshed them out in only a few sentences.
Only thing though: I wanted more about Luka. He was so distant before and the ending seemed a bit rushed. That could've been fixed by an additional conversation between the two after the agreement about the first names. I was so expecting one. *pouts*
Anyways, Kudos. |
 i-see-faeries 2007-07-04 . chapter 1Nice, everything fits in quite nicely. And honestly, it's very unique, not the least cliche at all. The ending is kind of abrupt, but that's it. I love it. |
 Amindaya 2007-06-13 . chapter 1'one of the most buttery people I know' --love how you worked that in there.
Aw, that was just adorable! :D |
 Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-04-11 . chapter 1How cute. I loved this one-shot. The whole taxi cab setting was utilized really well and the characterizations were amazing. When you first introduced Luka, I thought he was going to be mean and angsty all the time, but you proved me wrong. I love his character, it's three-dimensional and it compliments Ricky quite well.
And I really liked the suspense you built when you first introduced Luka's extreme happiness one day, then his depressed-moody self the next day. His change in mood didn't seem abrupt, and I thought you handled that pretty well.
Also, the quotations between parts of the story tied in well with the plot. And some of them were inspiring too. Overall, this was a great read. |
 fairytale failure 2007-02-01 . chapter 1Very powerfully written, I realize how hard it is to make the plot of a story come together. Great writing style, it seemed almost professional to me except that it would be more lifelike if things did not move along so fast. |
 Mae Choquette 2007-01-29 . chapter 1That was absolutely amazing!! I love it! |
 Delayed Epiphany 2007-01-29 . chapter 1As I said before... loved it!
^_^
/hug kiss/
much luv
shoes |
 scissor.hands.make.it.fun 2007-01-29 . chapter 1this is really good =]
i like how you didn't make it crude in any way, kept it kind of innocent, made it more meaningful in a way, i think. lol |