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| Catseye*Rose 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute and really romantic. I had a lot of fun reading it ^^ |
| Bluorange 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseAnd so it is, such is the life of a cabbie... Very good and well thought out, especially since it's a one shot. I do have to admit that I loved Milo though, he was so funny. Poor guy he didn't deserve all of the crap people gave him(well he did, but i still adore him) ~Remember man, peace is the ONLY way~ |
| Laurena 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseaw i liked this, it was cute! |
| paputsza 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseo.o i can't review can i? |
| The Falconer 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was such a nice story. Wonderfully told. I liked the secondary characters. You managed to fleshed them out in only a few sentences. Only thing though: I wanted more about Luka. He was so distant before and the ending seemed a bit rushed. That could've been fixed by an additional conversation between the two after the agreement about the first names. I was so expecting one. *pouts* Anyways, Kudos. |
| i-see-faeries 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseNice, everything fits in quite nicely. And honestly, it's very unique, not the least cliche at all. The ending is kind of abrupt, but that's it. I love it. |
| Amindaya 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuse'one of the most buttery people I know' --love how you worked that in there. Aw, that was just adorable! :D |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHow cute. I loved this one-shot. The whole taxi cab setting was utilized really well and the characterizations were amazing. When you first introduced Luka, I thought he was going to be mean and angsty all the time, but you proved me wrong. I love his character, it's three-dimensional and it compliments Ricky quite well. And I really liked the suspense you built when you first introduced Luka's extreme happiness one day, then his depressed-moody self the next day. His change in mood didn't seem abrupt, and I thought you handled that pretty well. Also, the quotations between parts of the story tied in well with the plot. And some of them were inspiring too. Overall, this was a great read. |
| fairytale failure 2007-02-01 ch 1, | abuseVery powerfully written, I realize how hard it is to make the plot of a story come together. Great writing style, it seemed almost professional to me except that it would be more lifelike if things did not move along so fast. |
| Mae Choquette 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely amazing!! I love it! |
| Delayed Epiphany 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseAs I said before... loved it! ^_^ /hug kiss/ much luv shoes |
| scissor.hands.make.it.fun 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abusethis is really good =] i like how you didn't make it crude in any way, kept it kind of innocent, made it more meaningful in a way, i think. lol |
| Ravenclaw-Trio 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abusepretty good work, I liked the way on how the parts are like a day-by-day format, or should I say, ARE a day-by-day format. you did use the words, and finished the challenge, bravo! xD jk loved your work. make another one haha |
| hbk8998 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseOk, let me jsut start by saying, great story. I enjoyed your style and all the detail. But i did have just one issue. Im almost positive the main character was gay, but im not sure and if it was a women, the way it talked was more of a mans vernacualr. but other then taht great story really brought me in. |
| Chocolate Herrings 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI love when you finish a story and your eyes prick with tears because there's such a rush of emotion (preferably happy) and you can't quite belive that it's over. |