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Reviews For: Such Is the Life of a Cabbie

Catseye*Rose
2008-05-03
ch 1,
That was really cute and really romantic. I had a lot of fun reading it ^^
Bluorange
2008-04-15
ch 1,
And so it is, such is the life of a cabbie... Very good and well thought out, especially since it's a one shot. I do have to admit that I loved Milo though, he was so funny. Poor guy he didn't deserve all of the crap people gave him(well he did, but i still adore him)
~Remember man, peace is the ONLY way~
Laurena
2008-03-27
ch 1,
aw i liked this, it was cute!
paputsza
2008-01-13
ch 1,
o.o i can't review can i?
The Falconer
2007-08-11
ch 1,
That was such a nice story. Wonderfully told. I liked the secondary characters. You managed to fleshed them out in only a few sentences.
Only thing though: I wanted more about Luka. He was so distant before and the ending seemed a bit rushed. That could've been fixed by an additional conversation between the two after the agreement about the first names. I was so expecting one. *pouts*
Anyways, Kudos.
i-see-faeries
2007-07-04
ch 1,
Nice, everything fits in quite nicely. And honestly, it's very unique, not the least cliche at all. The ending is kind of abrupt, but that's it. I love it.
Amindaya
2007-06-13
ch 1,
'one of the most buttery people I know' --love how you worked that in there.

Aw, that was just adorable! :D
Rock on an Ocean Shore
2007-04-11
ch 1,
How cute. I loved this one-shot. The whole taxi cab setting was utilized really well and the characterizations were amazing. When you first introduced Luka, I thought he was going to be mean and angsty all the time, but you proved me wrong. I love his character, it's three-dimensional and it compliments Ricky quite well.

And I really liked the suspense you built when you first introduced Luka's extreme happiness one day, then his depressed-moody self the next day. His change in mood didn't seem abrupt, and I thought you handled that pretty well.

Also, the quotations between parts of the story tied in well with the plot. And some of them were inspiring too. Overall, this was a great read.
fairytale failure
2007-02-01
ch 1,
Very powerfully written, I realize how hard it is to make the plot of a story come together. Great writing style, it seemed almost professional to me except that it would be more lifelike if things did not move along so fast.
Mae Choquette
2007-01-29
ch 1,
That was absolutely amazing!! I love it!
Delayed Epiphany
2007-01-29
ch 1,
As I said before... loved it!

^_^

/hug kiss/

much luv

shoes
scissor.hands.make.it.fun
2007-01-29
ch 1,
this is really good =]

i like how you didn't make it crude in any way, kept it kind of innocent, made it more meaningful in a way, i think. lol
Ravenclaw-Trio
2007-01-29
ch 1,
pretty good work, I liked the way on how the parts are like a day-by-day format, or should I say, ARE a day-by-day format. you did use the words, and finished the challenge, bravo! xD jk loved your work. make another one haha
hbk8998
2007-01-28
ch 1,
Ok, let me jsut start by saying, great story. I enjoyed your style and all the detail. But i did have just one issue. Im almost positive the main character was gay, but im not sure and if it was a women, the way it talked was more of a mans vernacualr. but other then taht great story really brought me in.
Chocolate Herrings
2007-01-28
ch 1,
I love when you finish a story and your eyes prick with tears because there's such a rush of emotion (preferably happy) and you can't quite belive that it's over.
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