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| laughedinsane 2008-01-19 ch 3,  | abuseplease update soon! |
| laughedinsane 2008-01-19 ch 2, | abuseLOLROFL. this girl. has got to be the most conceited girl ever. and i love it. i love how you made the girl conceited, instead of the guy, like most stories are. |
| laughedinsane 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusewow. this is really good. i love the part where you say how she's "seeing" nathan. that was funny. :D &&i love how you introduce Mathias |
| Worlds Wonderer 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThis story is amazingly well writen! I'm just sad it takes so long for you to update it. I'm sure if you updated it more frequently this story would be a big hit, but it's so old it's around page 250 in the romance stories. Not many people make it this far back to discover your story. Anyways, it is an amazing story and I hope you'll update it soon along with your other stories. By the way, I looked at your favorites and it seems you like vampire romance stories. If so, you should really read the book series with Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse by Stephenie Meyer. These books are pretty long but they're the most amazing books I've ever read! Cya, and good luck! |
| Burpingbitch 2007-02-17 ch 2, | abuseI liked your story. Very well written and the way you descirbe Geneveive, is quite funny - in a good way. P.S - Good Character Building! |
| CarlyJo 2007-02-16 ch 3, | abuseYay! I love this story! You have to UPDATE ASAP! |
| CarlyJo 2007-02-07 ch 2, | abuseThe story isn't bad at all. I like Mathias he is a good charactor. I don't really like Genevieve, she seems like she is a snob. That could have been your idea, I don't know, but if it was you did a great job making her into one. Update Soon! =:3 ) |
| Onion Ring 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat start! i cant wait to see where you go with it. i like the ceiling twist. its nice to see that the main character isnt the geek wanting the hot popular boy... anyway continue and if you got the time, check out my work |
| a little girl 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abusehey! your start's so cute! hahah like it! hope you continue... C: |
| Sweeney Todd 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThis looks very interesting so far. The cliffhanger is practically killing me! I like Genevieve's character. It's a refreshing taste from all the goody-goody ingenue types that seem to be cropping up around the site. |