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| Ninpo-Bugei 2007-02-27 ch 1, | This is sad, but powerfull writing. I guess i'd say good job on the poem, but I dunno, it doesnt..feel right. good job. |
| carousel chorus 2007-01-31 ch 1, | I love this, The imagery Is heartbreaking. Happy Writing ~PottersSweetie17 |
| notated descant. 2007-01-31 ch 1, | a scary reality and truth you've portrayed here. Well written! Good job! (and thanks for the review!) |
| anovelworld 2007-01-29 ch 1, | powerful. |