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For What Its Worth 2007-02-24 ch 4,	I find it wonderful that you are trying to make your chapters longer. On these chapters, I really do commend you. It was longer, yet possessed the same quality of writing. {Poor lucifer...he doesn't know anything that is going on anymore... And are you going to explain the fragment with Nathan, or will we wait with bated breath to learn?
slayer of evil 17 2007-02-19 ch 2,	wonderful work here. I like where the story is going and i can't wait for ch3. Keep them comming!
For What Its Worth 2007-02-18 ch 2,	Thanks so much for telling me! This is awesome. It's rather sad Kerry never knew, though. I am looking forward to much more information on Kerry. Your chapters could do with more content, but the writing is pretty good.
slayer of evil 17 2007-01-30 ch 1,	more more more! lol, i really like this alot, very good with your imagery. just watch your typos, like i have room to speak. ;)
Someoneguy 2007-01-29 ch 1,	I'm sorry if I've already reviewed, my computer gave out and I don't know if it sent. I like this, it's pretty good. :)
TwlvBlckRainbw 2007-01-29 ch 1,	This seems like its going to have a lot of potential in future chapters! I like it.