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| Shookie-Monster Elephant Ma... 2007-02-02 ch 1,   | I was in the same boat a year ago with my best friend... I know exactly how you feel. I love this poem, by the way. |
| xfallingx 2007-01-29 ch 1, | great wording! It's always smart to pick a topic that other can relate to, and I'm pretty sure anyone can relate to this. Great delivery on the last linetoo! |
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2007-01-29 ch 1, | Honestly, this site is for art, not advice for real world problems. Art is used to cope with emotions you have that are too over-powering for me, but I can not STAND to sit aside and let a chance to meddle slip through my fingers. Write her a note, about everything beautiful you notice about her, the way she chews her food, the color of her eyes, the way she giggles, everything. No matter how long it is. Then at the very end ask her for a date. Chances are she will be so swept off her feet she might not care if you were once "just friends". ♥ Erica Sky |