 let.this.go 2009-10-28 . chapter 10I love this story! Can't wait for the next update! |
 D.B.Ferguson 2009-09-22 . chapter 10Good insight. Can't wait for moew :) |
 fairies and snapple 2009-08-23 . chapter 10I liked the flashback, learning about what happened as kids and all. Ah, I'm so so glad you updated! Please try to again soon. |
 MsKarlz4-toolazytosignin 2009-08-22 . chapter 10 hahahaha niice!~ I can't wait for the next chapter!! =] Hope you update soon!~ |
 Sulfate 2009-03-09 . chapter 9ha! it's not cold where i live. nice and warm, but a little windy.
great chapter! |
 Obsession Changes Things 2009-02-09 . chapter 9Finally and update, and a really good one at that! Update again soon. Love the fight tactics Holly used haha, gets the boys every time.
~Obsession |
 fairies and snapple 2009-02-09 . chapter 9What an eventful day... their poor mother. Mine would... perhaps care less? Most would flip though, I think. I know that I want to know more about Lena's relationship with their whole family, because I remember some backstory, but what it was? In one side of the brain and out the other. Anyways, lovely chapter as per usual, and please update soon! |
 Enaid 2009-02-09 . chapter 9yay togetherness! i can tell you are in an amazing mood by this chapter. Goblets of fun & amusing holly and chase moments. Although I really liked their pranks i hope it doesnt stop. congrats by the way!! |
 xLove.2.Writex 2009-02-09 . chapter 9I WANT COOKIES! mom, does too, but that's beside the point. really great chapter. i just the adorable-ness of a new relationship...on paper. never been in one myself, but hey! lol.
PMS!!
~Katie
and i have to ask what kind of evilness you're planning, as they're all happy... doesn't happen very often. that's usually the calm before the storm! |
 Cat.With.The.Cream. 2009-02-09 . chapter 9 i love this story, its funny, witty and cute! i cant wait for the rest, please up date soon. and keep up the good work =D |
 MsKarlz4 2008-12-30 . chapter 8yaayy! lol it took me forever to read this--and I mean forever! anywho, I liked it :D |
 D.B.Ferguson 2008-12-20 . chapter 8Awesome chapter Murphy! Absolutely loved it! Noticed one typo though:“And you told her to take pity on MY and carried me to bed. Holly teased you for making a big deal out of it...”
Other than that it was really good and I really enjoyed it. Keep it coming. |
 julieell093 2008-12-19 . chapter 8i love long chapters because short one make me impatient. i was giddy reading this chapter, sheesh i was wondering wen they would get together. awesome job |
 Qzie 2008-12-16 . chapter 8^o^ Zomigosh, they're finally together! ^_^ Yay! *Lotsa confetti* That was so sweet. I love it to the power of infinity plus two.
Classic set-up. Lena can't have the guest room (I still don't get why they do that), she can't share with Holly, of course the only other option is Brayden's room. And pssht, Brayden doesn't wanna be at the party anymore, so he's tired and wants to go home. And hm, hm, hm, OH MY, Lena's in his bed! XD
Beautiful. ^^ Chat later. -Qzie |
 Enaid 2008-12-16 . chapter 8please no not as long!
so cute and glad that they aren't going to be hiding the relationship... that always turns out to be a mess
well adios til nxt time |