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| rust phoenix 2007-03-10 ch 1, | This is so true, you express yourself so well. I can definitely relate. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-30 ch 1, | This truly is the epitome of romance. I love the images of emerald oceans and peacock's feathers - it adds a bright splash of color to what could have been a colorless poem. Nice work with that. I love the last line of this piece - it's so incredibly heartwarming. Beautiful work. Keep writing! :) |
| Room Without A Door 2007-01-29 ch 1, | "Should I regret, that thinking of us, I thought only of you, and you, and you?" Love those last two lines, they speak so much/ Such a simple poem, yet I absolutely love it - I can't help but miss my ex! Amazing job! |