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| Sweet Red Berry 2008-01-15 ch 1,  | One of the well-written Yaoi fics I've ever read. :) |
| j.d. egan 2007-10-08 ch 1,  | Wow! I like the way it's written. It's like I was listening to my friend talking about what happened last weekend with his/her friends. You know what I mean? This one is truly entertaining. |
| sugoiai 2007-07-12 ch 1, | hehehe This story is so cute! I like how it was from the point of view of a stranger. The way that the girl who's seemingly a close friend to the boys doesn't notice what's happening between the two boys and a random stranger does. I enjoyed the way the stranger gradually believes they're together and we're seeing through her(I assume the stranger's a girl) eyes so we register what's happening through her. I like the little subtle humorous things put in that made me giggle...those types of stories are the best kind. The whole reference to the stranger getting /forced/ to read her first yaoi story and witnessing it and giggling about it with her friend...I saw myself then! hahahaha This was a really enjoyable story and I plan to read anymore you post! Keep up the nice work and getting even better! |
| Heart Of The Moon 2007-03-18 ch 1, | Wow! Nice! |
| Lhune 2007-01-30 ch 1, | You put it on the net after all this time! not that it was -that- long ago... (thinks about the time it happened... just how long ago was it?) I confess, I am most gratefull you did decide to share this moment with the rest of the readers. Fate must be give you an exam as good as this story, which would be very good, splendid, and other words like that. Anyway, what I wanted to say... I absolutely love this one ;D |
| Greene 2007-01-29 ch 1, | This was nice. it felt kind of sleepy, despite the crowd scene conveyed, and it also felt like something the reader should not have read. Some secret that they stumbled u8pon by accident. Very nicely executed, mind you. |
| CHIIJOY 2007-01-29 ch 1, | Hehe, I loved it. Great job. |
| Tomiko90 2007-01-29 ch 1, | I really like it! I want to see what happens next!! :D |