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Reviews For: The Bellbird Fancy

no.peace.los.angeles
2007-01-30
ch 1,
Very nice! It's not often that you come across a piece so eloquently worded on this site, and this is certainly nice. The rhyme works so well, too, as it keeps a rhythm throughout the piece, and the words you've chosen really have made this piece feel as though I'm in Victorian England or a similar time period. Gorgeous and elegant. Very nice work indeed. Keep writing! :)
eyes of sky
2007-01-29
ch 1,
I believe I may need a dictionary to appreciate this fully, it lost me towards the end! Good use of alliteration and rhyme, though some lines didn't quite scan.
Frore
2007-01-29
ch 1,
Yay! Another poem from you! The word usage was excellent (writing a few of them down as we speak) and the rhyme scheme keeps everything flowing smoothly. Deeply belletristic. I adore it!
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