Loved the story!
Great build up, lovable charchters and so much more!

I like this story. It's realistic and just pulls you along the entire thing. It doesn't give you a chance to decide you don't like it, just says 'come on' and you have to go along with it.

I would totally buy it if given the chance ... and the money ...

Aw, this was a really nice story. :)

THIS IS SO CUTE!

HI!
I never read the first version of this story but I'm loving the prologue :D Off to read the rest now :)
Talk to u soon!
Have a gd day!
BYE!!
x x x

P.S I think Orion is a better last name. Winter Goth doesn't roll off the tongue like Winter Orion does :P

That. was. incredible. thank you for restoring my faith in new age writers. It made me laugh, made me cry, made me fall in love sebastion XD and the sex? oh la la!! But that was only one bit, and I'm talking about the wholle story. INcredible. Thank you again.

The first line of this chapter doesnt really coincide with how he acted in chemistry last chapter (blowing up the lab), so you might want to pick whether you want him to be stupid or smart.
still, kudos. good story.

Okay, this is an awesome story, i love it, but do you realize it's like the highschool version of "you've got mail"? i like that movie too, but i was just wondering if the similar plot was on purpose.
You've got some typos throughout, too many to mention, but no big.
I love Sebastion's character, except how mean he is to Winter, he is so funny.
Winter sometimes has traits of a whinny brat, because he's so lucky to have all those friends and if he really didnt want them he could lose them at any time. Say, by acting himself? by telling the truth about his home life? By saying to their face how superficial and stupid they all are? But what's done is done...

I know, these are all negative comments, but i can say I love your writing style, I love Winter's sarcasm, and I love this romance. :)

I read this story like over a year ago, when it wasnt finished, and i'm so glad that you've finally completed it i'm rereading the whole thing. ^^ good story.

OOh jeesh yesh i do say i love this storyy!
Hm sebby is the best character ever! so yeah i love your writing style, very nice. I think i've read almost everything M/M on FP and booy this one is rockin, like WHAM!
But i normally read longer ones
I found this one
Its awesome
Toodles!

Hi,

Realy like reading your stories. Please keep writing and thank you for sharing them...:)

I loved this story so much. :) I couldn't stop reading it when I began it was that good! This was an amazing story and I really enjoyed reading. :D

I knew it wasnt REALLY peter. XD after i wrote that last review i figured it was like...peter putting the letter in for seb or something. bleh.

ha. my first assumption had been peter. would have been TOO easy for it be sebastian.

Not a fan of Sebastian.

"In less than five minutes, I’m situated in my black Ferrari and I’m driving out the front gate."

...perhaps I´m wrong but I don´t think that 14-15 year old kids are allowed to drive, even in the USA... just a little thought.

Liking the story though, cliched as it is. :)