Reviews for Cigarettes, Stalkers, and Other Orgasmic Objects

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Bluorange 2008-07-02 ch 2,	abuseOh my Gosh! This story is so interesting! I found it on my favorite stories list because Orange added it. (I'm Blue) But I'm pretty sure it's Sebastian...
Vicious Hyperbolizer 2008-06-15 ch 7,	abuseTrés sweet story. Great job.
Artemis1000 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseI love this story! It's so beautiful and sweet. I'm glad that Winter had the guts to be with Sebastian. And that Dakota was actually his most supportive friend... I hadn't expected that at all, but it's a pleasant surprise.
Moosher 2008-05-05 ch 7,	abusegah its like 7 am and i just finished reading this well done i must say..i really like kudos to you..you surprised me a few times by straying away from cliche senarios..very refreshing thank you..keep it up..love your writing style..and chapter lengths :D peace Moosh
Moosher 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abusei usually don't bother reviewing from the very first chapter.. but i had to for this story..because, for the lack of better words or deeper explanation, you've intrigued me. good job and now imuh read on :) -Moosh
Nonstandard 2008-05-04 ch 2,	abusethis is good (: but if sebastian is the anonymous person, I'll shoot myself. he's 'flamboyant' than acts tough..and if he sends these letters than I'll just be SO confused. eh. great story thoughh (:
theapathycrusade 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abuseJust read this story all the way through - love it, haha! Winter is so ** sexy. You really make his voice interesting, and the entire story...was just, amazing. And that flashback to prom night? It was heartbreaking. Great work.
Rachizzle 2008-05-01 ch 7,	abuseWUT. Loved the ending. :O
The S.L.Y. Righter 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseYour edits are very well done. Amazing story. Wow.
nonaccount 2008-04-21 ch 7,	abuseI'm thrilled you finished this! I went back and re-read the whole thing and I liked all of the additions except for one. The first letter that Sebastian writes to Winter you added all these, frankly annoying and off-putting, parenthetical asides. Then later Sebastian doesn't continue it in any future letters. (Let me add my own parenthetical aside, I could be wrong that it isn't "new" but I don't remember reading it before - either way if it's new or not, I don't think that it works very well.) Anyway, the point is I hope that you do publish this or anything, really, I think that would be great and this story is better without the extras in the first letter. My favorite addition was, of course, the cross-dressing scene - so cute! Not just Sebastian in girl's clothes, but also Winter coming to Sebastian's defense and Winter ogling him in the bathroom. Funny! Good job showing the conflict Winter was feeling about coming out to everyone. I like the compromise that he and Sebastian came up with, 'cause as Winter points out he is still learning to accept himself and it's a lot of stress to add the whole school to it as well. I'd love to read an encore. :)
Rayne 2008-04-20 ch 7, anon.	abuseBest story ever =D
Kyuuketsuki-Yaoi Fan- 2008-04-18 ch 7,	abuseEep! I Lovers This Story! You Should Definitely Make A Sequel!
tsubaki-dono 2008-04-18 ch 7,	abusePersonally, I find first-person perspective a little jarring. But it was solid, really in Winter's shoes, so it took the edge off for me. The method of emotional impact in first person is always difficult to relay but I think you did it pretty darn well. Over all, it was a fairly smooth read. Easy enough, believeable character maturity, and the thought processes were quite funny in some places. Not too heavy on the self-pitying angst too --must congratulate you for that. I also appreciate the general characters' personalities. The situations were believeable and real, the mentalities and personas seemed to hit high school right on. And I love the touch of gritty reality you put in there; the cruelty and that passion you can have only when in high school. So, well done! Happy writing and I look forward to reading more of your work in future.
gothicHobbit08 2008-04-17 ch 7,	abuseyay!! I am so happy you finally finished this!! And personally, I like all the revisions you made and the story would not have been complete without the last scene :)
readmerant 2008-04-16 ch 1,	abuseAt the begging you said that this was a cheesy introduction, and while I have to agree, I must also say that I love it, I don't know why, but I do. Anyway, even if I never review again, I can promise that I did read the whole thing, and if I do, well aren't you lucky?

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