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| Radio Saturday 2007-01-30 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Wow! The only problems I can point out here are a few minor grammatical errors -- periods where a comma or other punctuation mark would have been more appropriate, and "In death we will survive in others hearts" should be "In death we will survive in others' hearts." But other than that... I bow before you, Ms. 6. |