Wow, that was great. You're a really good writer so keep up the good work.

wow this is very very good. i hope it turns out to record well like u want it to since it's well written. good luck and keep writing!

Beautiful. If I may once you have, I'd love to hear the recorded version.

i can't tell you how much i loved 's got a nice short and sweet chorus wich is my style too and the verse about the silly smile almost made me cry. if there weren't people around right now then i would but that's because it reminds me of her. anyway, thanks for the acknoledgment at the end and Lynerd Skynerd kicks ass. see you later.

Hail

just a forgotten memory by now

Beautiful.

Awesome job. Wonderful lyrics.