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| Perfectly Paradox 2008-05-14 ch 1, | Wow. I love the consonance of speckled and knuckles. That is simply delightful. I love the simile, "he breathes like a mountain top/ (each breath is enormous)" Nicely done. |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-04-03 ch 1, | Beautiful - the stanza describing how he breathes like a mountain - breathtaking. Lovely. I'm in awe. Juliet. |
| love that's leaving 2007-03-08 ch 1, | beautiful. peace and love ~> Lifted |
| breezy nostrils 2007-02-27 ch 1, | there's a familiarity just reading your work. i wasn't sure you were still posting...well i left a little while ago but i'm still reviewing. hehe |
| lackluster 2007-01-30 ch 1, | i'm wondering what the inspiration for this was. i love it, really. especially the ending, "dipped down low in the february blues/find me inside myself, and let me find you" is so beautiful. great work here. truly amazing. |