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Perfectly Paradox
2008-05-14
ch 1,
Wow. I love the consonance of speckled and knuckles. That is simply delightful. I love the simile, "he breathes like a mountain top/ (each breath is enormous)" Nicely done.
Faithless Juliet
2007-04-03
ch 1,
Beautiful - the stanza describing how he breathes like a mountain - breathtaking. Lovely. I'm in awe.

Juliet.
love that's leaving
2007-03-08
ch 1,
beautiful.

peace and love

~> Lifted
breezy nostrils
2007-02-27
ch 1,
there's a familiarity just reading your work. i wasn't sure you were still posting...well i left a little while ago but i'm still reviewing. hehe
lackluster
2007-01-30
ch 1,
i'm wondering what the inspiration for this was. i love it, really. especially the ending, "dipped down low in the february blues/find me inside myself, and let me find you" is so beautiful. great work here. truly amazing.
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