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Kaerith 2009-12-03 . chapter 20
I really enjoyed this. I'm happy that the fact that Matt was in a wheelchair wasn't really the main point of the story and that there wasn't a bunch of gaggingly pathetic "I just want to take care of you!" feelings from Abe. Instead, it was just a story about two guys, one who happened to be disabled. (Though perhaps there should have been more of a hint about the grieving and depression that Matt should have gone through after the accident. He is bitter about it, but I never got the sense that he had had the huge struggle over the realization of his situation that is the usual reaction when one suffers such a drastic change in life and ability.)

Anyway, thanks for a morning of entertaining reading!
miss-life 2009-11-29 . chapter 20
I'm totally and completely in love with this story! I've already read Cold Turkey and after this one I'm planning to read everything you have on FP! You're amazing!

Tina
LondonCallingx 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
Jew eating Bacon! *gasp* lol. Nice story, I really enjoyed this
BisleyD 2009-07-29 . chapter 20
Thank you for sharing this. Aside from wanting to smack the overly-dramatic-main-character sometimes I really enjoyed reading from the beginning to the end :)
Crimsonoaks 2009-07-11 . chapter 20
oh this was lovely. absolutely lovely. it got a bit too angsty in the middle, but i kept reading (note: great compliment since i usually leave when it gets too angsty) i send you kudos and congrats like crazy
Frozen.by.Sloth 2009-06-21 . chapter 20
Hi.

I liked this story. :)

However, I'm stupefied that there's nothing about feeling coming back into his legs. That's major, and the whole "being in a wheel-chair" does tend to influence one's life greatly.

Either way,
thanks for sharing.

Bye~
lalaland22 2009-06-17 . chapter 20
Beautiful story...it was written very well, which is more than i can say for most.lol
lalaland22 2009-06-17 . chapter 9
Aw! cute chapter
Tinyyellowboxes 2009-06-08 . chapter 20
I LOVE YOUR STORIES! This was amazing! I can't wait to read all your other ones. You could seriously turn these into books. Thank you so much!
Mona May 2009-05-10 . chapter 20
This story is lovely!
Abe and Matt are adorable even when they are acting like jerks to each other.
Thank you for sharing this ^^
Priyanka 2009-05-09 . chapter 20
Yay, This story made me happy.
Sorry I don't have anything more descriptive to say! :-)
Celly 2009-05-06 . chapter 20
The story was great, of course there were moments where Matt ** me off because in my opinion he apologized for no reason and the ending was a little abrupt(I wanted more!). Other than that a brilliant story. I really enjoyed it. It was refreshing. I am even glad Matt stayed in the wheelchair, it kind of became him. They were both a little schizo but I love your characters. Great JOB!!
Pink Raine 2009-05-03 . chapter 20
as always your stories leave me spellbound. really i dunno what to write, where to start from to convey how much i enjoy reading your work. well my favourite character was abe, although mick was quite an amusing character as well.

the best part of this for me was how hard they were both trying to be together despite themselves, and neither of them knowing what exactly they wanted. and for the first time ever i actually didn't get annoyed when one of the two main characters slept with somebody else during the course of the main romance. i had to highlight that because usually it seems the author put it in to create an issue between protagonists, therefore rendering one or both - as well as the author - as stupid, but here, i thought, well what else would abe do? it was completely in character which was just amazing.
Taisi 2009-04-05 . chapter 20
Yay! ^^ Everything worked out in the end! There was a lot of twist and turns along the way, but the end result was very worth it. Kudos!
Taisi 2009-04-04 . chapter 4
*grinning* Abe makes me laugh, he really does. This chapter was to die for.
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