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| GrannyP 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseTell me about it! Then you have those of us who were forced to grow up faster than we were ready for, and it really makes the yearning for "the good ole days" come out. Nice concept for a poem! Good work. |
| Winged Kitty 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is so true. People spend so much time wishing they were some different age, older, younger, whatever. And then they wish to relive what they didn't appreciate. I especially like the last thought, that we should live life to the fullest because life could end at any time. A really good poem. And you're a really great poet. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. |
| Sine Die 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseI like your style and the overall poem itself. I can relate like so many others on the subject matter. Be sure to post poems more offend so I can read them because I'm sure they're just as good! |
| Kendal 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseIsn't that so true, though? We spend our youth wanting to grow up and our old age wanting to go back. I wish there were a magic formula for making you appreciate it while you've got it. Ah, well. Nice poem. I especially like the last two lines -- something about the "Southern charm" ring gives it more impact. |
| Living.My.Life.My.Way 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseur rite. u nvr no how long ur life wil last until ur very last second. only then, wil u no its over. great poem! |
| FreakierThanThou 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseAww! So sweet and... true. |