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Reviews For: The Ruby in the Ring

HGiel
2008-02-10
ch 4,
Interesting story! You should keep writing in it!
Hinata the vampire
2007-12-19
ch 1,
hey! i know you don'y know me, but i'm Alex Berry! I know! Isn't that awsome!? anyway LOVE the story! I can't wait to see the naruto world. I know what your thinking. "Jee wezz kid you are over obsesed with naruto!" well i am! and proud of it! Don't tell anyone else! Promise?

P.S. don't tell scott.
Phantom-Star
2007-10-08
ch 1,
Groovy, lol. I like it. But, is the timing not off a bit? The story says she was sixe when she met Ryu, and she's nineteen now. So that's a thirteen year difference instead of ten, right? Still, i like the way u described Miza, and the story starts out well. I'll read more soon.


Phantom
TimeTraveler4
2007-03-26
ch 4,
Don't be afriad to edit before posting. Also, OMG! Need to either make chapters longer or quickly make another chap.
TimeTraveler4
2007-01-30
ch 3,
The unconcious thing is getting old...
TimeTraveler4
2007-01-30
ch 2,
I love it so very much. :-D
TimeTraveler4
2007-01-30
ch 1,
I love it! I also like the editer... lol
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