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| HGiel 2008-02-10 ch 4, | Interesting story! You should keep writing in it! |
| Hinata the vampire 2007-12-19 ch 1, | hey! i know you don'y know me, but i'm Alex Berry! I know! Isn't that awsome!? anyway LOVE the story! I can't wait to see the naruto world. I know what your thinking. "Jee wezz kid you are over obsesed with naruto!" well i am! and proud of it! Don't tell anyone else! Promise? P.S. don't tell scott. |
| Phantom-Star 2007-10-08 ch 1, | Groovy, lol. I like it. But, is the timing not off a bit? The story says she was sixe when she met Ryu, and she's nineteen now. So that's a thirteen year difference instead of ten, right? Still, i like the way u described Miza, and the story starts out well. I'll read more soon. Phantom |
| TimeTraveler4 2007-03-26 ch 4, | Don't be afriad to edit before posting. Also, OMG! Need to either make chapters longer or quickly make another chap. |
| TimeTraveler4 2007-01-30 ch 3, | The unconcious thing is getting old... |
| TimeTraveler4 2007-01-30 ch 2, | I love it so very much. :-D |
| TimeTraveler4 2007-01-30 ch 1, | I love it! I also like the editer... lol |