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| Femme de Dieu 2007-01-30 ch 1,  | abuseWell, now... you KNEW you'd get at least ONE review now, didn't you? This is perfect in every aspect. Once again, you've managed to write MY heart in my absence. How do you do that? It is EXACTLY precise (and yes, I MEANT to be redundant). "He could stay like this forever if he so chose, and of course, so would I if only to prove what love knows. But that would mean my death and my dearest will not let me, he wants me to live to help my people see. With a final kiss goodbye he carries me back home... I awake with a sigh and close the heavy tome." *heaviest of sighs* Yes, that is expressly what happened, and for absolutely the same beautifully sad and self-sacrificing reason. *tears up a bit-- and smiles a wistful, yet grateful, smile* Thank you... Truly... |