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| j 2007-11-03 ch 8, anon. | abuseman i thought u posted a new chap. darn u, ur such a tease. |
| tisroero 2007-10-17 ch 7,  | abuseHope you plan on writing more... |
| K.T. The opinionated 2007-06-18 ch 7, | abuseHi, Ducky, I enjoyed this chapter. You made me want to beat the crap out of Keagan (a desire I feel toward most people who annoy me). How many "normal" people are there at the school? Is the whole town . . . different? (cue the music from "The outer limits") Please write as often as possible, -K.T. |
| CarlyJo 2007-06-14 ch 7, | abuseYou're killing me here! You leave the chappys at cliffies and then you leave! UPDATE SOON! Great job, btw! |
| j 2007-06-14 ch 7, anon. | abusenice, i like will. he's great. he can erk Elyon. yeah the chap is hella long, so why don't u find a better way to cut them?? oh and thanks for telling me u posted a new chap. gr. |
| xoxo1 2007-06-12 ch 7, | abusehaha, keagan reminds me of one of mi best friends and utz up wit ms stine? n wyhd she tell her to be careful?? update soonn |
| Too lazy to log on K.T. 2007-05-11 ch 6, anon. | abuseHiya, Ducky, I need another chapter! You've given me an addiction! I can't wait to hear what the deal is with Will. Oh, and the evil gym teacher, -K.T. The opinionated P.S. It sounds like Elyon's clothes look pretty cool . . . 'course I'm the girl who's terrified of pink and perky styles and loves black (before you ask; Yes, I have been accused of being Goth on more than one occasion *smirk*) |
| Not Dead Fred 2007-05-09 ch 6, | abusePlease don't tell me that Will is a Vampire or that 'Creepy Evil Gym Teacher Lady' is REALLY 'Creepy Evil Gym Teacher Vampire ** Cow **'! That would be terribly predictable...but I think I'll read anyway...even if 'Creepy Evil Gym Teacher Lady' is really a frog trying to take over the world...starting with Wisconsin...hey it could happen... ~Muse~ |
| CarlyJo 2007-05-09 ch 6, | abuseOh! I knew Will wasn't human! Update Soon! I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| j 2007-05-09 ch 6, anon. | abusewow that was a long chap. nice though. man i get the 2 stories a little mixed up lol. now u must type up the second part soon. oh and matt... lol u know what i mean. : p |
| Sonyashinto 2007-05-08 ch 6, | abuseohh why'd you have to stop it there it was getting interesting. please put the next chapter up soon, and kudos for making it nice and long. and don't worry if it is too long 'cause it is more fun to read long ones then short chapters. You agree? well, update soon. Thank You! Ja-Ne =^_^= |
| xoxo1 2007-05-08 ch 6, anon. | abusewoot woot, new chpt lurved it!! ahh, so wut is will?? and is watz up wit ms. stine? adn why does she scare him? hopin to find some answers soon |
| tisroero 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abusePlease, write at least a few more paragraphs even. I'm curious as to what kind of nature Elyon has, and her 'strangness'. Probably because the protagonist reminds me of myself. So please, keeping working on this! |
| Sonyashinto 2007-04-18 ch 5, | abuseNice chapter, ill be looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon. Thank You! Ja-Ne =^_^= |
| ebonydragon 2007-04-17 ch 5, | abuseWonderful! I love it! Update soon! |