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| Jade 2008-08-22 ch 1,  | Hm, this doesn't let me view it. It just says "empty"...The review made it sound awesome though. What happened? |
| Cupid's Jinx 2008-03-30 ch 6,  | um...empty? |
| fortuneismymuse 2007-10-06 ch 6, | Update. Now! (Please.) |
| Theres-Beauty-In-The-Breakd... 2007-09-24 ch 6, | Hey I love your story. Great stuff. And I kind of picture Chris Evans from Fantastic Four II as Ryan. Of course that's just me. Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and I can't wait for the chapter in Ryan's POV. The guy's out look has always been my favorite. :) |
| PaintSunshine 2007-07-18 ch 6, | you havent ud in a while and i havent reviewed in a while sorry. :( *huggles* |
| midnightbeauty 2007-07-04 ch 6, | Love the story, great chapter! Update soon, I want Sam and Ryan to get together! They'd be soo cute! :) Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| me... 2007-06-17 ch 1, | update already, wats taking u so long argh |
| bookworm925 2007-06-09 ch 6, | BLOODY HELL! I freaking love the story! thoufh there's the constant use of swear words, it's great, really! uh-oh... what's wrong with ryan? does he really like sam? i could realy imagine what he looked like when he was mad. lolx anyways, i glad i stumbled upon your story! update soon! emii |
| October Rose 2007-06-03 ch 6, | I swear I was laughing every ten seconds as I read your story...so now my family are giving me strange looks. The forty seven second shower in between infocommercials, Sam pouring her tea down Ryan's pants, Ava and her little encounter with Alyssa. Anyway, I'm really enjoying your story so far. Update yes? :) |
| dazedandconfused10 2007-05-27 ch 6, | wow i love your story! |
| dazedandconfused10 2007-05-27 ch 2, | i really like your story |
| s-pecial-lee me 2007-05-11 ch 6, | so good. love it. Sam's hilarious so are the guys. keep it up! update soon! |
| FindingADream 2007-04-25 ch 6, | Hey...I loovve this story (as I have stated in earlier reviews) but do you think you could...urm...update...pleeassee?? |
| diamondewdrops 2007-04-16 ch 6, | ah poor ryan. having the hots for someone so violent. at least he wont be bored when they finally hook up. too lazy to type more. all in all, supafly story XD |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2007-04-15 ch 6, | ((pokes chu)) me=love=story. UPDATE, PLEASE... i really love it... por favor, update! |