Reviews for Suicide of a Businessman

aprettywar 2007-02-28 ch 1,	quite graphic, but for the subject matter, it definitely works. very emotional too. all in all, i liked it :) keep up the good work.
Zyth 2007-02-12 ch 1,	I enjoyed reading this. It has a nice ending, and I enjoyed how graphic it was. Especially the bit about clawing through a wall. Poor cats:( x
Dillutional 2007-02-08 ch 1,	Very nicely done. I'm on a kick with poetry about suicide at the moment. I really liked the lines.."Then you turn the gun on yourself/Not thinking about the people you are about to hurt." I like this because I've been left behind in the wake of the suicide and it hurts more people than you think. The structure is a slight bit off, and that puts a little chink in the flow. Otherwise very nicely done. Kudos and keep it up!