one will not live with the other one...
true...

nice...

Well, it's different then the meaning of my poem.
But I do use a very similar idea.

"Down with the Sun, Up with the Stars"

I liked it.
Short but sweet.

♥
Erica Sky

nice concept... i think there's a typo on the last line, however: "clock of like and death" - i think it's supposed to be "life".

good job! Keep on writing!