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Basara 2007-02-01 . chapter 1
one will not live with the other one...
true...

nice...
Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2007-01-30 . chapter 1
Well, it's different then the meaning of my poem.
But I do use a very similar idea.

"Down with the Sun, Up with the Stars"

I liked it.
Short but sweet.


Erica Sky
notated descant. 2007-01-30 . chapter 1
nice concept... i think there's a typo on the last line, however: "clock of like and death" - i think it's supposed to be "life".

good job! Keep on writing!
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