This is really good, so sad though, great job and keep it up!

This was one of they most powerfl stories I've ever read. I love your writing style! You captured their relationship perfectly.

Aww, this is such a sad story. Very tragic. Nice job retelling it. I enjoyed it much.

that was lovely, and sad, as that story always is.

Cool...

Excellentay! You would be good at writing a story called Pyramus and Thisbe. They were the first ones that had a tragedy. Read a story about them and see if you like it. Rock on!