love it! it's awesome really, great use of lanuage here. the rhyming was fantastic and the theme relatable. nice job:)

hey! not a bad poem. not at all. its sad. sorry, im notthe best reviewer that exists in this world but i try my best, lol. you should really try to get it published. i recently entered a poetry contest and now im one of the semi-finalists and my poem is getting published. there's a new contest every month and i really think you stand a chance winning because this poem is really good. if your interested, go to bye!

I enjoyed this poems lots. It's got heart.

Yay, an decent poem! I've been searching for one for quite a while. I really, really, really, sincerely, extremely loved this! I don't have any criticisms for it, sry.