Wonderful work.

This is the perfect title for this poem. It reads like a song. I really enjoyed reading it.

I've read some of your other pieces as well, and I wanted to ask you: some letters you make bold. Is there any particular reason you choose those letters?

I also wanted to thank you for your review.

love the repetition. it has a sad mood to it (which is nice because i can totally relate).

kudos..