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Mellifluence
2008-08-03
ch 40,
abuseBeautiful, heart-warming and breathtakingly real.

A truly mature, thoughtful take on the oft-mauled historical romance genre.

Two thumbs up! ^^
Krirobe
2008-07-16
ch 1,
abuseI read this story so long ago, but at the time, I didn't have a chance to leave a review. I haven't stopped thinking about it, though. It was very beautiful. The characters seemed to have been effortlessly created, simple and complex at the same time somehow. And I remember the plot to be seamless. Though really long, I feel like every moment had some value. What particularly struck me was how you didn't overdo the atmosphere of colonial times, how you made it seem real and down-to-earth with some tension but without the overdramatization that most historicals I think are prone to. When she followed her love across the ocean at the end, it really made me think about how a person who moved away really lost almost every connection to the people of his/her past during that time. How did you discriminate in what to include of your research for this story because it must have taken a lot of reading of history books? Anyway, it was an admirably well thought out (and felt) story, and I am happy to have read it. Best of luck with your writing!
sussex
2008-06-23
ch 33,
abuseTis is a very beautiful piece of story. i wish it is made into a movie or tv show. i really like oliver. he is really a sweetheart. sigh how i wish he was mine and me his eliza . keep it up , renee. btw is there an epilogue? would love one on how oliver and eliza are copin and their kids too! :-)
.J0ana.
2008-05-09
ch 40,
abuseWOW! i think this story should be made into a book. it was so good and so well writen!
not signed in b/c of person...
2008-05-01
ch 26, anon.
abusethis is the chapter where i knew, for sure, that you're going to be famous some day. there is no explaining this kind of masterful story-telling other than by sheer, raw talent. you leave me awed and inspired. and this is coming from a senior english major at yale who hasn't yet met a better natural writer among her peers. please get published.
Written
2008-03-20
ch 40,
abusewhat a mature, beautiful story. well done! I was surprised to see that you are only a year older than my younger brother. I guess talent does not know age :)
Blcknblu
2008-03-16
ch 40,
abusei dont know why i never read the last two or three chapters. Some how i never received an email from fictionpress telling me they were up.

but anyway...

that was so sweet! i loved how it took a turn for the better all so suddenly! she said no and then boom!- theyre off to england. it was so sweet with Oliver and Elizabeth! You did a really good job on this story. Keep up the good work!
Written
2008-03-09
ch 22,
abuseaww. I know a different version of 'black is the color', but I like them all. that was quite sweet.

I love how you write!
Written
2008-03-09
ch 19,
abusehe's like oliver twist! har har...

kidding, kidding.

very good story so far :)
Written
2008-03-09
ch 10,
abuseaww liam :D
Written
2008-03-09
ch 8,
abuseyou mention pomegranates surprisingly often... they are not a common fruit.

though... they are sometimes a forbidden one!
Written
2008-03-09
ch 6,
abusethere's so much suspense! I can't wait to see what happens. oh my.
Written
2008-03-08
ch 2,
abuseI love how you've developed the sisters :) they seem to jump off the page!
Written
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abusewhat a gorgeous beginning! I felt like I was really there. you have great skill at weaving a tale. I can't wait to read more.
midnitefaeri
2008-02-25
ch 40,
abuseYour writing is just amazing. I cried when the two of them saw eacother again. and i can't believe it only took you a year to write this. It's just so amazing.
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