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| Mellifluence 2008-08-03 ch 40, | abuseBeautiful, heart-warming and breathtakingly real. A truly mature, thoughtful take on the oft-mauled historical romance genre. Two thumbs up! ^^ |
| Krirobe 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI read this story so long ago, but at the time, I didn't have a chance to leave a review. I haven't stopped thinking about it, though. It was very beautiful. The characters seemed to have been effortlessly created, simple and complex at the same time somehow. And I remember the plot to be seamless. Though really long, I feel like every moment had some value. What particularly struck me was how you didn't overdo the atmosphere of colonial times, how you made it seem real and down-to-earth with some tension but without the overdramatization that most historicals I think are prone to. When she followed her love across the ocean at the end, it really made me think about how a person who moved away really lost almost every connection to the people of his/her past during that time. How did you discriminate in what to include of your research for this story because it must have taken a lot of reading of history books? Anyway, it was an admirably well thought out (and felt) story, and I am happy to have read it. Best of luck with your writing! |
| sussex 2008-06-23 ch 33, | abuseTis is a very beautiful piece of story. i wish it is made into a movie or tv show. i really like oliver. he is really a sweetheart. sigh how i wish he was mine and me his eliza . keep it up , renee. btw is there an epilogue? would love one on how oliver and eliza are copin and their kids too! :-) |
| .J0ana. 2008-05-09 ch 40, | abuseWOW! i think this story should be made into a book. it was so good and so well writen! |
| not signed in b/c of person... 2008-05-01 ch 26, anon. | abusethis is the chapter where i knew, for sure, that you're going to be famous some day. there is no explaining this kind of masterful story-telling other than by sheer, raw talent. you leave me awed and inspired. and this is coming from a senior english major at yale who hasn't yet met a better natural writer among her peers. please get published. |
| Written 2008-03-20 ch 40, | abusewhat a mature, beautiful story. well done! I was surprised to see that you are only a year older than my younger brother. I guess talent does not know age :) |
| Blcknblu 2008-03-16 ch 40, | abusei dont know why i never read the last two or three chapters. Some how i never received an email from fictionpress telling me they were up. but anyway... that was so sweet! i loved how it took a turn for the better all so suddenly! she said no and then boom!- theyre off to england. it was so sweet with Oliver and Elizabeth! You did a really good job on this story. Keep up the good work! |
| Written 2008-03-09 ch 22, | abuseaww. I know a different version of 'black is the color', but I like them all. that was quite sweet. I love how you write! |
| Written 2008-03-09 ch 19, | abusehe's like oliver twist! har har... kidding, kidding. very good story so far :) |
| Written 2008-03-09 ch 10, | abuseaww liam :D |
| Written 2008-03-09 ch 8, | abuseyou mention pomegranates surprisingly often... they are not a common fruit. though... they are sometimes a forbidden one! |
| Written 2008-03-09 ch 6, | abusethere's so much suspense! I can't wait to see what happens. oh my. |
| Written 2008-03-08 ch 2, | abuseI love how you've developed the sisters :) they seem to jump off the page! |
| Written 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusewhat a gorgeous beginning! I felt like I was really there. you have great skill at weaving a tale. I can't wait to read more. |
| midnitefaeri 2008-02-25 ch 40, | abuseYour writing is just amazing. I cried when the two of them saw eacother again. and i can't believe it only took you a year to write this. It's just so amazing. |