I sure like the title. The line "My calloused hands never gave a whine when I scrubbed out the tears that ran down my cheeks, side by side," is very beautiful in imagery. This poem is cold, tragic and screaming all at the same time.


-C.N

beautiful piece... I really like the title... powerful images... I really liked how you italicized dying... awesome job

I have to say this is a very beautiful and intense piece.

I especially like the line "My calloused hands never gave a whine when I scrubbed out the tears that ran down my cheeks, side by side" its image provoking and very deep.

Well done, i have to say this piece has really touched me and brought tears to my eyes.

I love it!

Lotsa love
~AC~