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| Krystal Watters 2007-05-31 ch 8,  | abuseso much for a 3 chapter series, huh? oh well ^^ i like this better anyway. and they're such long scrumptious chapters, not short flighty things. Keep it up! |
| VexiVicious 2007-05-31 ch 10, | abuseEach chapter is just incredible. I love the character, I can see why the Sun God is entertained by her. The two hours she talked about a place she'd never been.. well I think it would be interesting to read a clip of it ;) |
| The Ferrett 2007-05-30 ch 10, | abuseThis is a cxurious ytale.; I like ::)) |
| Krystal Watters 2007-05-30 ch 7, | abusewas lilia learning anchient greek in school before she got whisked away, or has appollo granted her the gift of tongues? |
| Krystal Watters 2007-05-30 ch 6, | abuseyour story illuminates my lack of historical knowledge. That is all i have to say... |
| Krystal Watters 2007-05-30 ch 5, | abuseug! how horrible it must be that every time you try to insult a guy, it only turns him on more... Deniz is a strange charagter for sure. interesting... she believes in the greek gods, but not in jesus nd whatnot. if it were me, by the time i was transported back in time, i would believe that anything is possible , but s'ok. ah.. a hint of profecy? |
| Krystal Watters 2007-05-28 ch 4, | abusesheesh... at least things havnt gotten too much worse since appolo dumped her there... but certainly , they will get worse |
| Krystal Watters 2007-05-28 ch 3, | abuseI love her. Im just sorry that she cant go crazy on a god... but its not like she has any other choice. I feel so sorry for her. Where did you read that appolo didnt have a preference? i didnt know that. interesting ^^ |
| vexi 2007-05-15 ch 7, anon. | abuseThe main character is fantastic! And it's entertaining to read! |
| Krystal Watters 2007-05-11 ch 2, | abuseodd beans... |
| Krystal Watters 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abusetalking to the dead man and talking to the spear make her look insane. just wait untill she starys saying something like "yes, i know that plan won't work, spear... you've told me this before" then it really will seem like Castaway. i cannot wait to read more ^^ |
| TheAngelofhope 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed reading this. Nice job on this. |
| Vexi 2007-02-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis chapter made me snigger a lot. Entertaining, I'm really enjoying it! |