Gahh! I can totally understand this..I fit in with basically everyone at my school, but I don't really think that I am fully accepted, though I don't really mind...Most people at my school are whores and **. Unfortunately for them, news spreads fast in our teeny little town heh heh...Anyways..I hope to hear more from you! Write on =]

OMG i feel the same way. that is a cool poem lindz. it's not so poetic, but i like the feeling it conveys.
and for goodness' sake, stop using my real name. it's infuriating.

Excellent poem with a horrendous, gritty moral. There is much truth in this one, much world. The rhythm is generally good. It is such a surprising thing, such a poem (almost) about age which I half-expected to be so whiney and really isn't. It's perceptive I like the certainty mixed with fear; it's kinda creepy.

I hope you can understand this review. You have made me think.

I can tell it's a bit old--it is a different style from the other poems of yours I've read. It's a sad, bittersweet (or just bitter?) look at growing up. Aww, this is how I felt, and still feel... it doesn't get much better when you enter high school, at least for me, unfortunately. All I can say is, find the right friends, that made me so much happier...

Sorry this wasn't very review-ful, but you made me reflect. Thanks.

By the way (I forgot to mention this), you would get a lot more reviews if you let anonymous (non-logged in) people review. Right now only people who have accounts can review your stories.