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| Pricilla Grey 2007-03-07 ch 1,   | I'm not sure if I like the repetition of the word 'fire', but overall, this poem is very effective. Nice job. - Pricilla Grey |
| mobman 2007-02-11 ch 1, | nice description, you hit every angle... keep it up |
| happypills03 2007-02-02 ch 1, | wow.. i like fire, but you when you put it this way you realize how distructive it can be. well written Jewl |