This is a really great beginning to your story. Though the prologue could've been longer. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, can't wait for more! =3

A little short. But good.


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Interesting tiny prologue you got there. It didn't really explain much and I could almost barely imagine what's happening, but I'll keep reading and see what you have up in your sleeves with this story. I'll stay tune and see what is held for the readers.