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Reviews For: Ten Things I Like About You

SuckerForLove
2007-06-27
ch 1,
abuseOH. I really liked that. I thinks it's a really cute opposite to Ten Things I Hate About you.

That was such a sweet and innocent poem. Hope it all works out with this person you like!
A Beautiful Yearning
2007-01-31
ch 1,
abuseI really like the style of this poem. The message is simple and doesn't need wordplay or analogies to get the point across.
Toxic.Industrial.Waste
2007-01-30
ch 1,
abuseOnly one complaint, really.

You used the word "Carefree" twice.

Maybe you should have come up with a different word.
Like, whimsy, untroubled, capriciousness, ect.

Other then that, cute poem.
I wouldn't call it a love poem per-say.
But, it has the feeling of the innocents of a crush.


Erica Sky
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