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| SuckerForLove 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseOH. I really liked that. I thinks it's a really cute opposite to Ten Things I Hate About you. That was such a sweet and innocent poem. Hope it all works out with this person you like! |
| A Beautiful Yearning 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI really like the style of this poem. The message is simple and doesn't need wordplay or analogies to get the point across. |
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseOnly one complaint, really. You used the word "Carefree" twice. Maybe you should have come up with a different word. Like, whimsy, untroubled, capriciousness, ect. Other then that, cute poem. I wouldn't call it a love poem per-say. But, it has the feeling of the innocents of a crush. ♥ Erica Sky |