"Oh well, I tell myself,

the heart is just another throbbing muscle." -- Ouch. Now that is angst. It hurts and cuts and is bitter--

Actually, this whole thing was bitter. It was harsh and on the border of angry, but bitter nonetheless and I like that, it gives it character.

I'm tempted to quote it more--PRAISE it more--but I think these words are enough: This is going on my favs, because you made that line and you kept the mood up without ruining it with any inconsistancies. It's brilliant, marvelous--

I love it.

- Noelle