Hey!

Interesting drabble, I thoroughly enjoyed it; very deep.

Thank You,

Kaiyako K.

I love it.

I truly do.

-Indigo Carmine

i really liked this nice job

This is made of seven different kinds of amazing.

wonderful.

GAH! Scary-assed last line. "That is, if I were still alive." That makes me jump out of my skin.

And...HA! at your author's note. I guess I won't be putting up any corrections here. :p

Anyway, I really enjoyed the simplicity of this. Because it's short, it reads like a bullet. It's also a reminder to readers that teaching kids using obscure warnings is just simply *fucking stupid*. :p

Keep on writing, dude.

-McQuinn

This is...beautiful. No other words can describe it.

aw thats so cute, but kinda of weird,, haha,,

I don't know why; I love this.
Well, I do know why. Maybe because it rocks.
Keep writing! I love reading stuff like this. It amazes me.

Great little drabble. I've never been able to stay in the limits...

This story is extreamly real and to the point. Really I thought this was touching and beautiful and the ending makes my spine shiver.

Love your writing
-Mika

First off, this is so touching. So amazing and real (I think that's the right word I'm looking for.) I'm going to favorite it!

And I would like to thank you for your very kind review. I just came home from work and in kind of a crappy mood and your review cheered me right up! So thank you so much.

Very jolting, that ending. Will you be continuing in the same thread or posting other unrelated oneshots?
~ Rebecca

the ending is surprising. especially that last sentence reminds me of "lovely bones" by alice sebold. i love it, though. continue?