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| Kaiyako Kagami 2008-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseHey! Interesting drabble, I thoroughly enjoyed it; very deep. Thank You, Kaiyako K. |
| Indigo Carmine 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseI love it. I truly do. -Indigo Carmine |
| explosion of planes 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abusei really liked this nice job |
| to feel alive 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is made of seven different kinds of amazing. |
| skunk 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abusewonderful. |
| McQuinn 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseGAH! Scary-assed last line. "That is, if I were still alive." That makes me jump out of my skin. And...HA! at your author's note. I guess I won't be putting up any corrections here. :p Anyway, I really enjoyed the simplicity of this. Because it's short, it reads like a bullet. It's also a reminder to readers that teaching kids using obscure warnings is just simply *** stupid*. :p Keep on writing, dude. -McQuinn |
| HauntedMisery 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is...beautiful. No other words can describe it. |
| Leaving Here 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseaw thats so cute, but kinda of weird,, haha,, |
| latest hero 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why; I love this. Well, I do know why. Maybe because it rocks. Keep writing! I love reading stuff like this. It amazes me. |
| Shadow Gryphon 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseGreat little drabble. I've never been able to stay in the limits... |
| queen of catastrophe. 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThis story is extreamly real and to the point. Really I thought this was touching and beautiful and the ending makes my spine shiver. Love your writing -Mika |
| Alana Starr 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, this is so touching. So amazing and real (I think that's the right word I'm looking for.) I'm going to favorite it! And I would like to thank you for your very kind review. I just came home from work and in kind of a crappy mood and your review cheered me right up! So thank you so much. |
| TryNotTo 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseVery jolting, that ending. Will you be continuing in the same thread or posting other unrelated oneshots? ~ Rebecca |
| lackluster 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abusethe ending is surprising. especially that last sentence reminds me of "lovely bones" by alice sebold. i love it, though. continue? |