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Kaiyako Kagami 2008-01-27 . chapter 1
Hey!

Interesting drabble, I thoroughly enjoyed it; very deep.

Thank You,

Kaiyako K.
Indigo Carmine 2007-10-15 . chapter 1
I love it.

I truly do.

-Indigo Carmine
relapse into change 2007-10-02 . chapter 1
i really liked this nice job
to feel alive 2007-09-21 . chapter 1
This is made of seven different kinds of amazing.
skunk 2007-08-07 . chapter 1
wonderful.
McQuinn 2007-07-07 . chapter 1
GAH! Scary-assed last line. "That is, if I were still alive." That makes me jump out of my skin.

And...HA! at your author's note. I guess I won't be putting up any corrections here. :p

Anyway, I really enjoyed the simplicity of this. Because it's short, it reads like a bullet. It's also a reminder to readers that teaching kids using obscure warnings is just simply *fucking stupid*. :p

Keep on writing, dude.

-McQuinn
HauntedMisery 2007-04-08 . chapter 1
This is...beautiful. No other words can describe it.
Leaving Here 2007-03-21 . chapter 1
aw thats so cute, but kinda of weird,, haha,,
just a ray of sunshine 2007-03-16 . chapter 1
I don't know why; I love this.
Well, I do know why. Maybe because it rocks.
Keep writing! I love reading stuff like this. It amazes me.
Shadow Gryphon 2007-02-28 . chapter 1
Great little drabble. I've never been able to stay in the limits...
queen of catastrophe. 2007-02-08 . chapter 1
This story is extreamly real and to the point. Really I thought this was touching and beautiful and the ending makes my spine shiver.

Love your writing
-Mika
Alana Starr 2007-02-03 . chapter 1
First off, this is so touching. So amazing and real (I think that's the right word I'm looking for.) I'm going to favorite it!

And I would like to thank you for your very kind review. I just came home from work and in kind of a crappy mood and your review cheered me right up! So thank you so much.
TryNotTo 2007-02-03 . chapter 1
Very jolting, that ending. Will you be continuing in the same thread or posting other unrelated oneshots?
~ Rebecca
lackluster 2007-01-31 . chapter 1
the ending is surprising. especially that last sentence reminds me of "lovely bones" by alice sebold. i love it, though. continue?
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