"And that was what made her convinced she could still handle the situation." Why not say that is what convinced her she... it's a bit less wordy.

Very foreshadowing ending there... nicely done. This part definitely makes you curious.

The parenthesis seemed to be his thoughts in the beginning, so italicizing that other line seemed odd to me. But other than that I liked it... nicely done.

curious how such a short chapter can pose so many questions to the reader...

nice work.

I like it.

It feels like a very stylish way of telling a story honestly, even though there's so many details omitted.

It'll be intriguing to see how you can take it further heh.

this reminds me of the phantom of the opera song
hah, it is playing in the back of my head


anyhow
it has a clipped ending
i like it

i think it's interesting. the scene you put forth doesn't require background but you can definitely develop it. i like it short, personally.