Chapters way too short, put story into a one shot!

Nice story Mary. Kinda creepy though, and makes me think twice when I hit the road.

This was a pretty good concept. I like how you told the first two chapters from the POV of the drivers. It would have been nice if you had established a little more back story to the drivers, and I agree with one of your other reviewers that you could have included an explanation of the black feather, but still all in all a pretty good tale. Good job.

Good story. The black feather is a little odd though. It's just there. Her past never mentioned feathers of any kind. It'd make a little sense if at least a crow or something made some kind of appearance.

A single bigger chapter would have worked for this story, but it's kinda nice seeing what had happened to this poor girl. It's interesting to see a 'strong, but hurt in some way' women theme you seem to have in a majority of your stories.

It's a ghost-type story, so you can't really have a true solution to the story, unless you 'send' her in some way. But a good story, nice read.

Mm, phantom hitch hiker stories. Yours is good- short and sweet. It's a nice touch to give Marie a sense of morality over who lives and dies. I don't feel that the last chapter adds too much to the story, though. It would have been fine as a one chapter story.