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| Osunale 2007-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseThe opening is excellent. This poem masterfully examines the thoughts following ended romance - the questions, the doubts. "a twist of bitter lips and kisses" is lovely, bitter-hinted imagery. Good work. |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abusethat's beautiful, glad you like my stuff. ^_^ |