amazing story, so well written, and hast to be one of my favourites. (: excellent job!

Awww! Amazing story! Really cute! Love it! MR Smith is awesome!

Oooo! My bf and I went ice-skating on our first date too! Haha. And I ended up fallin on my butt when he was teaching me too:DDD

Hi! This is Melissa from A Drop of Romeo. We're in the process of rewriting all our older reviews and I was in charge of Hit or Miss. Here is your rewrite:

Melissa Thinks: Hit or Miss is really just a great big bundle of cliché. Which in our case, is a good thing. Svette (love that name) is seriously in trouble when her selfish boyfriend breaks her expensive camera that she needs to graduate from her competitive arts school. Along comes Logan who needs a new singer for his band and when he happens to hear Svette sing in the shower, he's willing to cough up the cash for her new camera if she joins the band temporarily. Of course, they bother hate each other, so you can imagine how hard on the two of them it turns out to be.

It started out with the classic “woke up next to the guy I hate and I don’t know how I got here” way, and so I thought “Oh gosh, not another!”, but actually I was pleasantly surprised. The incorporation of their band and the music they play was really intriguing for me, as a ridiculously big music fan. And we can’t forget the core of all Hate/Love stories: the banter. All of the exchanges between Svette and Logan were witty, tension-filled, and realistic. The POV does shift between Logan and Svette a lot, but it’s not annoying or disruptive; it helps to develop both main characters and give the reader of taste of their feelings towards each other, so we can watch their relationship grow just as they themselves do. Honestly, I'm not really a big fan of Hate/Love stories because they often all turn out the same, but Hit or Miss was definitely a hit with me.

Wonderful!

I really liked the epilogue! Nice words at the end!

Keep going on with your writing - I really like it!

Have a nice day, Mira

Im in love with the way Logan has nicknamed her Slim smh and idk why

Hello, there. It's Juliet from ADoR and your story has been inducted onto the site. Congratulations. :D Here's the raving review:

This story bounces between the POV's of Svette and Logan. It starts off somewhat cliche, but it most certainly keeps the reader hooked. After all, one can never get tired of cliches. And yes, this one is complete, which is another plus. Great characters.

XOXO,

Juliet

Great story. Thanks for sharing.

gah! i totally loved this story, sorry i didn't review other than this one but i would have been just repeating myself with "I LOVE THIS STORY" and "LOGAN IS SO HOT" haha ;)

also, you're a BRILLIANT writer, i give you ten out of ten :D

Absolutely love this story.

aww im happy that they got back together...it just sows you that no matter how much time goes by you will be with the one your ment to be with...

Wow, awesome story!

It's one of my faves...

I get bored a lot with stories and when I started reading this one, I thought I was just going to get bored with this like a lot of others but this story definitely held my attention. I laughed a lot but when the 22nd chapter came, I pretty much wanted to cry when I read every chapter...

ok enough of this mushy shit.

The story was really good to read and I'm glad I read it.

This is a great story, and I look forward to reading more of your writing...maybe there will be a sequel?

yay i'm glad they got together! i enjoyed reading this :)