This was an all around great story. I loved the idea of the band, and the name was fantastic.

I just never understood the nickname Slim though...

Anyway, her quick remarks seriously reminded me of myself.

Great job

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YAY!

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Really good story, The chemistry between them was perfect. I even got a little choked up when he left for New York. If you ever decieded to write about the other characters in he band I would look forward to read about them.

Well done with this story, it was well written and very fluent.

Keep up the good work

WOW! ITs good!

Great story!

aww. loved it. they're so perfect together.

hey, love the story so far, but i was just wondering how paige and cade could make it together with cade in new york, but logan and svette can't... i mean, i didn't really think their love was weaker. anyways, i'll just keep reading. :D

Bright light assaulted her vision

I LOVE the personofication! hehe...I'm such a geek...

Great job...suspense...must read... well, see ya. I gotta get to the next chapter.

Until Next Time

DArkened

Aw...fantastic story!

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really good story

excellent plotline

is there going to be a sequel or is this it?

enjoyed reading this. you described the music pretty well.. but with the revenge.. what parts were they pulling off? and i kept on expecting craig to turn up somewhre in teh story and threatehn svette or something, because it would b uncharacterstic to just leave ur car dying without fighting back..

Love it! It's really really well written and cute.

Ri

Good story.

oh, im very glad it had such a great ending! it was wonderful and i loved it and am sad its over but i loved the ending so all is good!