your story poem or story is so good. it's like a perfect definition of reality when it comes to love.

Sad and beautiful... I think we can all relate. Great job.

love like always! so very beautiful! i'm soo jealous! you are so amazing and i'm somewhat good but hey thats just how the world works. lol jk love ya! and love the peom no i take that back i love all of your poems!

Well that sucks! All a dream, how sad. Great poem, I love it. In line 8 did you mean sand instead of sent?

interesting...i can relate

So sad...I'm feeling kind of like that right now. Great job.

Aww sad! I have had so many dreams of this type. It is heart breaking. Good job making it so real.