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| Tark 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I like this alot. Some ify wording but the concept, the idea is truly unique, as far as I know at least. I like how you think about this, especially the cops being darker than those they are arresting very good point. Good piece overall. |
| Doc Blood 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot but it frightens me in its irreversability. Is there not an atonement bleach somewhere? Well done. Peace, Doc |