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| Infinite Smiles 2007-02-17 ch 1,  | abuseYou need to published. |
| Osunale 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseThis hits first as a blooming narrative, then pushes into gorgeous sight. "On some nights, Schubert was summoned" is almost off-handedly conversational, yet the follow-up not everyday image of "yellowed codex repainted sable" gives it an elevated spin. The last stanza is wonderful. Excellent. |
| Moondog Dozier 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseThe scene that is created is very visual, due to the specific descriptions. I like the atmosphere of this work. It stands relatable to the reader, but holds onto a subtle form of mystery that the reader isn't privy to. I also like how the natural elements are used to enhance the emotion. Very well written. Good write. MD:77. |
| Anaare 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abuseAs always, breathtakingly visual. How you do it, I don't know, but continue. Simply wonderful. |