This was very interesting.

This was deep. I got shivers all down my back from this. The idea of what he is experiencing is devastating. Well done!

Kahn-
That was...was...Haunting. Bitter. Amazing. Wowing.
I felt the panic. I burned with the heat. I studied genocides for a semester and we covered Auschwitz. My story, "The Sound of Rain on Stone" tells the story of the death camps for the Roma people.
Very good. Twenty thumbs up. Which is a strange mental picture.
-Amber