hey Lirra

This is Franny with an acount. Write More! I've waited all summer and still I'm waiting!

write more! It seams intersante(Spanish for interesting) :)

this is fascinating so far! your writing style has a perfect balance of detail and simplicity. i noticed a spelling error or two, but nothing serious. the storyline is really creative so far. i'm looking forward to reading more! update soon!

Hmm this is more like Communism rather than socialism but there both really close. This story is kindof creepy. I love it. you could make a series based on this.